Helping the chronic late filer Here's a puzzler that
an assistant metro editor brought to me. If anybody has successfully dealt
with this problem, we'd love to know what worked: The question drew a range of responses, from deadlines are not to be broken to tolerating this quirk given that we¹re talking about an otherwise excellent worker. Here¹s a sampling: This may be harsh,
but it worked for one of my reporters. Their copy failed to make the edition.
After several times of being bumped by his co-workers, he learned that
if he wanted to continue as a reporter, and have his copy in print, he
needed to adhere to the rules and deadlines that all others must follow.
It took a while (two to three weeks), but he has yet to miss a deadline
since - knock on wood. If you've given him
a number of chances and nothing improves, it's time for negative reinforcement.
If he misses deadlines, don't print the stories. If his stories are that
critical, give them to somebody else and tell him he has to show he's
reliable at making deadline before he can be given any decent assignments.
He'll get the message. Somebody should explain to him that missing deadline
can result in delays all the way down the production line. Some reporters
don't even think about that. They're just fixated on their ledes. In my experience,
solid reporters who file late have a flaw built into their writing process.
Often it's lack of organizing their material before writing, which doesn't
sound like this writer's weakness. Just as often, it's lack of knowledge
about what drafting is and what it can do for their story. Drafting ought
to be a freewheeling, headlong, no-rules-apply plunge into discovering
how the writer will express the story that's already in his or her head.
But we cringe at writing without rules. We think: Gotta have a lede. Gotta
have a nut graph. Gotta have a quote up high. I started in the business
writing that way, and did OK. I took pride that good-to-great leads were
my calling card. My sources noticed them (though I don't know if readers
paid much attention). But late in life I learned about the idea of just
sitting down, taking off the mental shackles and writing whatever came
out. No lead needed. Get the quotes later after your brain, as it writes,
tells you which ones it wants to use. Don't sweat the nut graph. Just
create. When I coach and lead writing comes up, I like to tear down the
bad habits we've learned by sharing that I started the draft of a column
a year or two ago with "Mary had a little lamb" because no words
would happen. So I forced some onto the screen. Right after that, more
gibberish spilled out. And soon after, the message I was looking for started
happening. And I have found it works far better than creating perfection
a graf at a time. When the column draft was done, I simply had to lop
the gibberish off the top and polish what remained. The finished product
was pretty much there. I wrote faster and revised faster because I had
better raw material. So I've learned to eschew perfection; I think it's
illusory. I'm much more interested in getting organized, then letting
my brain do the hard work and letting great stuff happen. Actually, I suffer
from the same problem, and earlier, intermediate deadlines do help. If
the story is due at 5, make a summary, or top, due at 2. Then a first
draft at 3 or 4, or whatever's appropriate. The draft may have holes,
but it must have a beginning, middle and end. Where facts are still to
be collected or confirmed, that can be indicated. One solution is to
not run the story in that edition. Of course, you need to do that on a
story where the timeliness is more important to him than it is to the
editor. It makes the point, though, that deadlines are deadlines, not
wishful thinking.
While this reporter
sounds more compulsive than most, problems writing on deadline are quite
common. My workshop on writing clearly on deadline is one of my most-requested
(meaning editors see it as a need in their staffs) and one that gets strong
response from writers (meaning they also see the need). The handout is
available at NTNG: http://www.notrain-nogain.com/Train/Res/ArcT/deadline.asp It might be his work
habits, but there's also this possibility: Does this habitually-late reporter
feel good about what happened to his stories when he did file them on
time? As we all know, sometimes reporters (1) self-edit to the extreme
or (2) hold stories till the last minute so the desk won't have time or
reason to change them. An idea: Somebody who isn't this reporter's editor
could ask him over a cup of coffee why he thinks he hands his stories
in late. Has he had a good experience when he did hand them in on time?
It also might be that he feels the editor is just passing them through,
so he must be editor too. The first issue is
whether this is an efficiency issue or a deadline issue. If it's a deadline
problem, it has to be solved. If it's the writer's style, and he's fairly
efficient despite this mechanism, then is it worth worrying about, even
if it goes against the editor's grain? (That's the way our projects reporter
works, so we've focused on helping him become faster on his shorter daily
stories.) Some techniques you might try: Have the reporter divide his
time into quadrants (this is Peter Elbow's philosophy): two-fourths to
reporting, one fourth to writing, one fourth to rewriting. No rewriting
allowed until the fourth quadrant. Have him write the first draft without
notes -- just sit down and write. Or try to get him to at least write
without stopping, then make a printout and do the editing/rewriting on
the hard copy. I often suggest that people set artificial deadlines: finish
the story by 3 p.m. and enforce it, then take until 4 p.m. to revise as
warranted. I do this for myself. I'd also suggest that the asst. metro
editor read "Coaching Writers" by Roy Peter Clark and Don Fry,
if she/he hasn't already done so. That may give the editor tips for coaching
the writer and helping him organize. Is he filing late because he figures
that gives the editors less time to muck with his copy? (I had a friend
who habitually filed late for that reason, and because it meant his story
was more likely to appear on a section front because the inside pages
already had been filled). And look at whether it's an organizational issue,
despite the organizational skills he seems to have. Is he organized in
his pre-reporting and reporting? I find that when I'm well-organized and
have a clear viewpoint, I do little rewriting during my first draft. But
if I'm unsure or hesitant (that is, I haven't taken time to think through
a well-defined focus statement and outline), I tend to do a lot of back-and-forth
writing and rewriting.
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