Laurie
Hertzel, writing coach and editor of the Minneapolis Star
Tribune's newsroom newsletter Above the Fold, launched the discussion
about where great story ideas come from. She edited the responses
into this piece for Above the Fold.
(Posted September 2002)
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Good Ideas
Where great enterprise comes from, and how it grows
"Most journalism
trades in stories so dull and familiar that it makes the world smaller
and stupider than it really is.'' - Ira Glass, NPR producer ``This American
Life''
A couple of months
ago, Gene Weingarten of the Washington Post set out to find and profile
the town that best exemplifies ``the armpit of America.'' His resulting
story was a great read, going from slightly snide premise to epiphany
without straying into cruel or sappy.
Last month, a New York Times Sunday Magazine writer followed a calf from
birth to slaughter as a way to explore all kinds of issues - bovine growth
hormones, the economics of farming, the use of feedlots and antibiotics,
the benefits of grass-fed vs. corn-fed, etc. The issues unfolded in the
narrative as the calf grew.
In the same magazine, another writer followed a T-shirt - from purchase
in New York City, to used-clothing shop, to rag vendor, to a Ugandan village.
These were great ideas for stories - topical, unusual, interesting, surprising.
You can't write a great story if you don't have a great idea. Most ideas
come from beat coverage, as they should. But even beat-related ideas need
refining and focusing. How does an ag writer get from ``I need to write
about the economics of farming and the potential problems of antibiotics
in feed'' to ``Let's follow a cow from birth to slaughter''?
Where do these ideas come from? How do you prime the pump? How does an
offhand observation (``That town is the armpit of the nation!'') turn
into ``Saaaaay, wait a minute, that's a good idea . . .''
I decided to ask around.
Get out of the
office.
``Each season, I load my reporters into my Jeep and we hit the road. We
cover four suburban communities, so we simply hit the roads of our area,
dirt or paved, and look for stories. We did this last fall and came up
with 72 ideas. We found some real gems off the beaten path. We marveled
at the junk yard/taxidermy/putt-putt course operator. We were intrigued
by how the sale of a truck, engulfed in weeds, went. We were struck by
the odd names of streets and wrote a story not only on the peculiar names,
but also on how you can get a street named for you. We discovered, to
everyone's surprise, a state-run jail hidden in the deepest part of our
coverage area.
``You don't know what is going on if you're sitting at your desk. Go out
and see the world. We get caught in a rut telling the stories of those
who beat down our door or get us on the phone. The better stories are
those we hunt down.''
- Karl Kling, Milford (Mich.) Times
Brainstorm.
Sitting around jawboning in a meeting can work; we do it here. Also useful
is spontaneous brainstorming, where you grab one or two people and discuss
your idea, trying to find your way from topic to story. It's hard to think
up something good in a vacuum; it's tough to be creative sitting alone
in your cubicle. Talking it through with like minds is helpful. Here's
what other newsrooms do:
``We have monthly reporters meetings geared toward exchanging story ideas.
We sit around for an hour or so and talk about ideas and end up feeding
off of each other's comments until we have homned in on a great focus.''
- Vicki Kidd, Sunbury (Penna.) Daily Item.
``An editor suggested
a project idea; I wouldn't even call it a full-blown idea. It was more
like a topic. We talked it over and then scheduled a brainstorming meeting.
We invited a mix of people - reporters (some who would work on the project
and some who wouldn't), other editors. We asked them to bring ideas and
share their experiences, and, in return, we provided lunch.
``I took notes while the managing editor and executive editor kept the
conversation going. It was great. Ideas and experiences began bouncing
off the walls. In the end, I had several pages of good ideas to add to
the mix.''
- Mona Lisa Castle, Jackson (Miss.) Clarion-Ledger
Ask key questions.
``I think that any observable thing or phenomena can be turned into a
good story by applying at least one of the following questions:
`` What is it? This, of course, gets at the issues involved in explaining
things, i.e., what is weapons-grade anthrax? How does it differ from bovine
anthrax? Etc.
`` Where does/did it come from and where is it going? This gets at history,
context, process, future spin, etc.
`` How does it work? Simply that. The calf-to-market and the T-shirt stories
fall into this category and overlap with the previous question.
``The end result, I think, are stories that can leave the reader saying,
`Gee, I didn't know that.' Are such stories important? Not always, but
they can always be interesting and filled with surprise for the reader.''
- Tom Johnson, Boston University
Turn the story inside out.
``We try to do what Narratives Editor Maria Carrillo here calls `turning
the kaleidoscope.' For example, we were presented with a family with a
child suffering from cancer. And instead of making the child the subject
of the story, the story became everyone else in his family and how they
were impacted by the cancer.
``We recently recognized the anniversary of a military crash that killed
21 men. Instead of revisiting the families a year later (as we typically
do), we revisited the field and the farmer where the crash occurred to
see what the year has been like for him. That made for an interesting
story, I thought. So, I suppose it's taking a routine story and just looking
at the other players involved and seeing if they would provide another
story.''
- Denise Watson-Batts, Norfolk Virginian-Pilot
``Taking an uncommon look at something common is an effective technique.
Ken Fuson wrote an award-winning series when he was with the Baltimore
Sun that was a simple idea: following the lives of the kids in a high
school play from auditions through the production. Of course, their real-life
drama was lots more interesting than the drama on the stage, especially
when told by Ken.''
- Steve Buttry, Omaha World-Herald
``An editor once assigned me to go to the first day of kindergarten and
check out all the weeping kids and overwrought parents. Instead, I focused
on a little girl who was very composed, didn't want to kiss and hug her
mother good-bye in front of the other kids and was obviously keen on starting
school. She was peeved that so much time was being wasted the first day
- she told me she was ready to learn how to read and wanted to get to
it. The story was much better than if I had focused on the usual angle.
Especially with the ordinary assignments or the ones that are annual stories,
it's important to look for things that are out of the ordinary.''
- Nancy Weil, IDG News Service
Read the fine
print.
``It sort of depends on the job, but a lot of times in my old job (at
the Boston Phoenix) I used to get them from the Yellow Pages . . . I used
to have to do these profiles with alarming frequency - a 700-800 word
feature every other week. I must have been stuck on the B's because I
did baby models and bronze baby shoe salesmen and baby modeling agencies.''
- Ellen Barry, The Boston Globe, quoted in ``Best Newspaper Writing
2002''
``My best pieces
when at the paper trenches came from classified ads sections of paid and
free newspapers and official dailies of the Public Administration (where
the bills, rules, licenses and fines are published, at least in Mediterranean
and Latin countries).''
- Antoni M. Piqu, Journalism professor, Universidad de Navarra, Spain
``Billboards. You'd
be amazed how many ideas can come out of those: Either subject, appropriateness/
taste, etc. I, too, agree with classifieds and add obits to that list.
And, while we are talking about the paper, read the briefs from all sections.
A 2-inch brief about a shooting or an award can lead to something bigger.''
- Yvette Walker, The Kansas City Star
Chat up strangers.
``The people in our communities are the best sources of information for
new ideas. Strive to talk with someone new every day. Go beyond the local
sheriff, the town supervisor and the school board president. Visit the
local diner and talk with the old timers sipping coffee. Chat with the
gadfly who attends every village board meeting or school board hearing.
One of the favorite bad jokes of Humboldt State University journalism
professor Mac McClary: What do a reporter and a French chef have in common?
They are both only as good as their sauces.''
- John Hatcher, Oswego State University, Oswego, N.Y.
Carry a notebook.
``Obviously, reading your own newspaper carefully is a good one, but I
also think the plain and simple advice of keeping a notebook in your car
and jotting down things that interest you is too often not done. We stop
being reporters when we go home, and we should be always on the lookout.''
- Maria Carrillo, Virginian-Pilot
Eavesdrop.
``An editor of mine used to hold a Monday morning meeting and ask everyone
present what people (neighbors, friends, churchgoers, PTA members, etc.)
were talking about over the weekend. Usually something from that conversation
turned into a story.''
- Yvette Walker, The Kansas City Star
``Pay attention.
Listening to what is being said around you, no matter where you are, and
keeping your eyes open will lead to tons of good story ideas.''
- Nancy Weil, IDG News Service, Boston
``I try to go early
to games I'm covering, sit in the parents' section for awhile and listen
to what parents are talking about. Parents are often very tuned into what
is going on with a team, and they like to show off to their friends what
they know. I've learned all sorts of things about players and teams this
way - from athletes struggling with illnesses to coaches getting ready
to quit.
``Pay attention. This sounds obvious, but I don't see enough reporters
doing this. This is why you are paid to sit in the stands for three hours
covering a game. Is the starting five different tonight, why? Is the team
playing a different defense, why? Is that kid who was a scrub and barely
playing last season, now starting, why? A reporter's best friend is an
inquisitive mind.''
- Eric Bursch, Rapid City (S.D.) Journal
Stay 'til the end of the meeting.
``While newspapers nationwide rely too heavily on meeting coverage to
fill their pages, often the best stories that can be found at meetings
go overlooked. They are the sleeper items that often fall under sentences
like `In other news.' Pay attention to the parent who shows up because
she is mad that the bus won't stop in front of her house. Talk to the
little old lady who's worried about the snow plow that goes too fast down
her street. These same issues may be on the minds of many other people.
One of my favorites was a story about an elderly couple who came to complain
to their city leaders because one family on their street refused to shut
off their Christmas lights, spreading yuletide cheer even in the middle
of June. Attend meetings of more obscure groups as well - like the local
library board or the area volunteer fire company. You might be surprised
what comes up.''
- John Hatcher, Oswego State University
Examine ordinary things.
``Look in all the normal places: backs of cereal boxes, classifieds, small
print on Pepto Bismol bottles, your parents' will.
``Or: Take two words at random, type them into a search engine. I did
this with TOILET BOWL once and got the damndest results. Did you know
there are companies that custom design and decorate toilets? Swans and
eagles and gamboling ponies and flowers and . . . do you know there are
a jillion plumbing helper Wweb sites? I wonder what that's done to the
plumbing business?
``Or: Make somebody else's idea your own. Mostly, editors' ideas suck.
When the reporter gets a bad one, tell them to make it their own. I once
was sent to cover a Saturday Boy Scout Canoe Race. How, I thought, can
I possibly write about this so anyone but the Scout master and the winner's
mother will read it? So instead of writing what amounted to a sports story,
I waited to see who came in last. The final canoe crossed the finish line
two-and-a-quarter hours behind the winners. And when they crossed it,
they were going backwards. The story ran out front.''
- Bill Luening, Kansas City Star
Get out of your
routine.
``Take a different road to work once a week. Doesn't have to be a huge
detour. Could be just a few blocks. I often see things I haven't seen
before - or see things from a different perspective. Case in point: One
of my reporters is working on a story about a billboard that has been
taken down, a fact I noticed while driving last week. The billboard used
to say this, in big blue letters: `Someone you know is gay or lesbian.'
The advertisement was paid for by PFLAG, the parent advocacy group for
gay men and lesbians. It was up for about three weeks. It's gone now -
and we're trying to find out why. We think it's because conservative politicians
who drive by the sign every day pressured the billboard company to take
it down or face reworked zoning codes banning billboards near freeways.''
- Jeff Haney, Salt Lake City Desert News
Keep a tickle
file.
``The best antidote to an idea drought is to expect it and plan ahead.
Idea dry spells are a form of lack of confidence - like writer's block
- and they happen to us all. You could spend a lot of time analyzing why,
but that's probably less interesting to you than a solution. (One likely
reason: Overwork. Lack of time to daydream and simply observe. When you
are weary, it's hard to be creative.)
``Plan for these dry spells by keeping a clipping file. Read every local
publication - shoppers, alternative weeklies, self-published magazines
- and clip anything that seems as if it could lead to a follow-up story
or a profile. Ask yourself if the story you're reading suggests a larger
issue. Scribble a thought or two in the margin. The fatter this file gets,
the sooner you'll regain confidence in your ability to generate ideas.''
- Rosanne V. Pagano, University of Alaska, Anchorage
Buy a different
magazine each week.
``Buy a science magazine, such as Discover, this week; a literary magazine,
such as Tendril, next week. Try Trailer Life, Backpacker, Money, Fortune,
Mother Jones. Read them, the ads as well as the text. Tear out the most
interesting articles and carry a small file of those to read in spare
moments so that you can extend your world.''
- Don Murray, from ``Writing For Your Readers.'' The chapter ``Seeing
the Obvious'' has 13 other suggestions for generating story ideas, including
always carry a book; sit in one place for an hour and observe people;
and pursue an interest outside of journalism.
In Search of a
Narrative Off the News?
By Jan Winburn
Assistant Managing Editor, Baltimore Sun
Who has something at stake? Bill Plaschke asked this question about the
McGwire-Sosa home run chase. The answer led him to Fargo, N.D., where
Roger Maris grew up. Plaschke reveals in ``Standing By Their Man'' that
this is the only place in the country rooting for no one to break Maris'
record.
Where did it all begin? This question led some writers to McGwire's hometown
and to his coach.
Who's doing the work? (Otherwise known as ``Who has the shovel?'') This
question inspired Jimmy Breslin's story on the gravedigger who dug JFK's
grave at Arlington.
Is there an ordinary person whose life is somehow like this? An example
spun off the Clinton/Hillary dilemma would be the story of a couple who
has lived through adultery and put their marriage back together. Or, a
spin off Monica: the life of a regular 21-year-old. Or the life of another
White House intern.
What is the question raised by this story, and could the answer suggest
a story? At one point in the Mark McGwire-Sammy Sosa chase, as fans became
increasingly aggressive about catching the home run balls, the question
became what would happen to the record-setting home run ball; how much
would it be worth? This led one writer to ask the same question about
Roger Mariss' record-setting home run ball, No. 61. What had come of it?
Who had caught it? What was it worth? The answers can be found in a wonderful
story about the guy who caught it and how his life was changed by the
event. The kicker: his realization that his own place in history, like
Mariss', was about to be eclipsed.
Fold notes: Thanks to Maria Carrillo for sending this in.
DFLers vs. Democrats
By John Addington
Star Tribune Copy Editor and Style Committee Chairman
The legislative and hurtling-toward-elections season is a good time to
review the question: Is he/she a Democrat or a DFLer? Well, that depends.
The official name of the party in Minnesota is the Democratic-Farmer-Labor
Party. Members are DFLers, an awkward usage, to be sure, but the only
one we have. Republicans often call them Democrats, and some DFLers use
the word occasionally, but our style, on the local scene, is DFLers.
Nationally, however, congress members men and senators from the party
are Democrats.
A bit of history: The Minnesota party is a merger of the Minnesota Democratic
Party and the Farmer-Labor Party. The latter grew out of the Nonpartisan
League of North Dakota, a radical agrarian movement that grew strong in
that state during World War I and moved into Minnesota, less successfully,
during that period. The Farmer-Labor Party came to power in 1930 with
the election of Gov. Floyd B. Olson, but declined after his death in 1936.
The two parties merged in 1944.
And a caution: You'll sometimes hear or read Hubert Humphrey called the
father of the DFL. He wasn't. As a 33-year-old Macalester College instructor,
he was a very active participant in the merger negotiations, but far from
the only one.
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