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Reporters
and editors are partners in developing story ideas. Reporters
should present editors with thoughtful, detailed proposals
and should not expect editors to embrace every half-baked
suggestion. Editors should help reporters develop, focus and
deliver stories. Steve
Buttry, Writing Coach/National Correspondent, Omaha World-Herald,
uses this handout in his workshops.
(July, 2001)
Questions?
Call Steve at (402)444-1345.
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Developing
Story Ideas
Reporters and editors
are partners in developing story ideas. Reporters should present editors
with thoughtful, detailed proposals and should not expect editors to embrace
every half-baked suggestion. Editors should help reporters develop, focus
and deliver stories. Enterprise stories, especially long-term projects,
may require considerable reporting and writing before you even decide
whether and how to pursue the story. Many of the points presented here
apply to almost any kind of story beyond routine daily coverage. The scale
would be different if you're suggesting a quick-hit story for this Sunday,
a major enterprise story you might spend a few weeks on or a major project
you might spend months on. But the principles are the same: Before reporters
and editors invest significant time, space and money in a story, you need
to develop the idea well.
Advice
for Reporters
- Put your idea
in writing. For an important enterprise story, especially a project
idea, write a detailed proposal. This gives the editor something more
substantive to consider and show to other editors. A written proposal
demands consideration and response. Writing also starts you on the exercise
of focusing your work and writing the story. Sometimes a well-written
proposal can become the framework for the overview of a series or the
introduction to a story. On a shorter-term story, the proposal may be
just a one-paragraph e-mail or a one-page memo, but putting an idea
into writing always helps.
- Propose timely
stories. Your editors are and should be interested in newsy, timely
stories. Even projects should be timely. In your proposal, address the
news peg your story would have. Should it run before, after or during
an upcoming event? Would an anniversary, holiday or hearing provide
a time peg? Has a recent report or decision given urgency to the issue?
If a reporter proposes an "evergreen" story that could be done at any
time, an editor could reasonably respond that the story could be done
at any time, which often means something else is more pressing now.
If your story is an evergreen, tell the editor why it is timely now.
If you're dusting off an old proposal, look for a news angle and explain
why now is the time to do the story.
- Propose specific
ideas. Don't propose "an in-depth look" at the University of Nebraska-Lincoln.
That's broad and unfocused, as well as being an evergreen. Propose a
project comparing the university to its peer schools as many ways as
you can measure: reputation, research, faculty awards, student entrance
exam scores, etc. The specific focus helps the editor get a feel for
the story right away and start sharing the reporter's excitement.
- Propose relevant
ideas. Explain in your note why this story will matter to readers.
Even if you think the relevance is self-evident, tell your editor why
this story matters to readers and how you will make that relevance clear
in the story.
- Explain context.
Henry Cordes of the Omaha World-Herald pitched his proposal for
a project on the University of Nebraska-Lincoln to his editors with
the same edge that he eventually used in the stories. He was going to
compare the university's mediocre academic reputation and achievement
with its athletic excellence.
- Consider national
comparisons. If you're examining a local issue, find out how the
local situation compares to national averages and national extremes.
- Consider local
impact. If you're examining a national issue, explain how your story
will cover the local and regional angles. How does the issue affect
the your local area? Who here is involved on either side? Who here is
an expert? Are members of your local delegation dealing with the issue
in Congress? Will the issue cost us money or generate spending locally?
- Consider previous
coverage. Read your newspaper's clips. Read coverage in other newspapers.
If your paper wrote about this issue a couple years ago or another paper
wrote about it a couple months ago, tell how the situation has changed
or how this story will be different. Tell how you're going to examine
issues the competition has missed. If your proposal sounds like stories
your editors has already read, you're not likely to get the go-ahead.
- Tell what you
know. Do some preliminary reporting, so you can describe the general
situation or the scope of the problem. The more you know, the better
you can sell your need to learn still more. The more hypothetical or
speculative your story sounds, the stronger your chances of being told
it might be a good story to pursue "someday."
- Describe avenues
of inquiry. Tell what you need to find out. Maybe you have some
tips that you need to check out. Maybe you have a hypothesis. Tell your
editor where you expect to look and what you think you might find. You
don't need all the answers in your proposal, but you need to know enough
to present some good questions.
- Outline possible
stories. Of course, the information you find will shape the final
stories, but include a possible outline in your initial proposal. Say
you'll write a first-day main story about the Lost Boys of Sudan who
come to your community, with a sidebar on the civil war in the Sudan,
then a second-day story about the cultural adjustment that Sudanese
refugees face. The outline may change. Maybe you'll decide that domestic
violence is worth a sidebar to the story on cultural adjustment. A working
outline helps editors envision your final stories and start anticipating
them.
- Consider usefulness.
Think of ways this story will be useful to your readers and explain
in your proposal how you will make the finished product easy for readers
to use.
- Consider photos
and graphics. Visual elements need to be part of your plan from
the very first. Think about statistics you might find that should be
presented graphically. List possible maps you would need. Identify events
or interviews that should be photographed. If you have no illustration
ideas, admit that and suggest in your proposal that you and the editor
should meet soon with the photo and art departments to brainstorm and
begin coordination. Maybe you should involve a photographer or artist
in your original proposal.
- Consider travel
and expenses. If you need to travel, include the plans in your proposal.
If you'd like to do some polling or hire an accountant, engineer or
other outside consultant, explain what you would need and why. Don't
expect editors to spend big bucks without a strong explanation from
you about what the paper would get for its money. And don't assume that
editors won't spend the big bucks.
- Consider computer
analysis. What data are available that could explain some aspect
of the topic you are examining? If you don't have the computer expertise
to analyze the data, you will need to learn and/or involve a colleague
who does. But your initial proposal should address data that may reveal
a problem or prove a point. You might want to consult a reporter who
does more work with data to brainstorm how data may be used.
- Consider other
beats. Does your proposal overlap with someone else's turf? Tell
the other reporter as a courtesy, or ask the other reporter's advice
on angles to pursue. Ask whether the other reporter wants to collaborate
on the proposal and the story.
- Consider a timetable.
How long would it take to do the project as you're proposing? Acknowledge
that delays can happen, but suggest a timetable, dealing with your news
peg and with realistic expectations of how long the proposed work could
take. Maybe you are proposing something that is immediately timely but
also requires a longer-term inquiry. Suggest what you could do right
away and how long it would take for the deeper look. Would the deeper
look still be timely when it's finished? What news peg might you have
at that time?
- Consider your
daily duties. Can you juggle this story, at least for a while, with
your regular duties? Your editor is going to have to consider this question.
Help her out by explaining how much, if any, of your regular duties
you could continue while working on this story. If you need to be fully
detached, state that clearly.
- Think big. Your
proposal is no place to scrimp on time, space or money. Propose the
best way to deliver the best package possible for your readers. Propose
spending as much time as it takes to do a thorough job, but not so much
that the story won't be timely, or that someone else will do it first.
Propose devoting as much space as it takes to do a thorough job, but
not so much that you bore your readers or distort the importance of
the issue. Propose spending whatever money it takes to do a thorough
job. The editors may trim your plan back in terms of time, space or
money. And maybe they should. They are responsible for the budget, the
balance of the paper and for deploying the staff. Your role here is
to advocate for a story you believe in. The editors' role is to fit
that story into the paper's big picture.
- Think small.
Don't lose enthusiasm for the plan when editors don't adopt your
grand design. Make adjustments. Decide what's the best way to do the
story with the time, space or money the editors decide it's worth. If
your basic idea is good, you need to maintain your enthusiasm for the
story.
- Don't give up
easily. If you really believe in a story idea, but your editor doesn't
want to do it, ask why. Try to learn specifically what your proposal
is lacking. Be open to the possibility that the editor is right. Maybe
you got excited about the idea and lost perspective. Or maybe you failed
to include some important points in your proposal. Maybe you need to
do more research to convince your editor of the local impact. Maybe
you forgot to give the proposal a news peg. If the editor raises valid
objections that you can address, maybe you can agree to pursue the story.
Or maybe you should propose it again at a later date when it is more
timely.
- Keep the ideas
coming. Learn whatever lessons you can from the discussion and rejection
of a story idea and try again. Your best defense against bad story assignments
from editors is to keep your editors considering your own good story
ideas.
Advice
for Editors
- Respond promptly.
Reporters need to hear quick responses to their story proposals.
Silence is an unacceptable and unprofessional response to a reporter's
proposal. Acknowledge the proposal immediately, even if you will need
more time to give a meaningful response. If you will be too busy for
a while to give a story fair consideration, admit that and give the
reporter a date when you can discuss it at length. And keep that date.
If you have to delay again, make the delay short and tell the reporter
promptly that you have to delay. Few things are as harmful to relationships
with reporters as being unresponsive or inconsiderate about matters
of importance to the reporter. "Someday" is not the time to pursue the
story or to talk about it.
- Show enthusiasm
and appreciation. Even if a reporter gives you a poorly developed
proposal for a bad story idea, express your appreciation for the initiative.
If this reporter is going to be successful (and if you are going to
be successful as this reporter's editor), the reporter must show initiative
and come up with good story ideas. Coming up with bad story ideas is
an important first step in the right direction. Even as you explain
the problems with the proposal, you must praise the initiative. Or maybe
it's a good idea that's poorly developed. Show some enthusiasm for the
idea itself and for the initiative and help the reporter develop the
proposal better. And if the reporter gives you a good story idea that's
well developed, by all means show lots of enthusiasm, even if you're
unable to turn the reporter loose on the story right now.
- Don't say no.
Ask questions. With rare exceptions, you won't know enough from
a reporter's proposal to reject it immediately. Ask questions that will
help you make a better decision. Does the proposal sound too expensive?
Ask whether this is the only way to get the needed information. Does
the proposal sound like it's beyond this reporter's abilities? Ask how
he would surmount the obstacles that you see. Does the proposal not
seem timely? Ask what the news peg would be.
- Don't say yes.
Ask questions. If a reporter has a strong proposal that excites
you immediately, you still need to help the reporter develop the plans.
Identify potential obstacles and ask how she expects to overcome them.
Ask about the news peg. Ask about possible data bases that might be
available or travel that will be necessary. Ask whether the reporter
has consulted reporters with overlapping beats.
- Be honest. Tell
the reporter why you are passing on a story idea. Maybe you have something
more important for the reporter to pursue. Maybe you like another idea
the reporter has proposed better. Maybe you don't think the reporter
is ready for this challenge. Maybe you think another reporter is the
appropriate person to tackle this story. Tell the reporter honestly.
The effort and initiative the reporter has shown deserves nothing less
than a candid answer.
- Consider scope.
Maybe the reporter's idea is on target, but you can't spare the
time, space or money to address it on the scale the reporter has suggested.
Or maybe the idea is timely and demands more immediate attention. Discuss
with the reporter whether the idea can be addressed quicker or on a
smaller scale. Or if you think the reporter's proposal isn't ambitious
enough, ask about other questions to pursue. Or ask whether some computer
analysis is in order.
- Don't automatically
assume it's too expensive. A good reporter will propose ideas that
will seem expensive to a good editor. If you're not responsible for
the budget, don't assume that an idea is too expensive. Help the reporter
develop and perfect the idea, then pitch it to the editors who hold
the purse strings. If you are responsible for the budget, discuss cost
problems candidly with the reporter. Make sure you're hearing the best
case for why you should spend the money. If you simply don't have the
money or aren't convinced this story is worth it, discuss whether the
story can be done another way. If you would sacrifice quality by doing
the story on the cheap, discuss whether the story can wait until the
budget isn't as tight. If the story has a strong news peg, it may be
wise to do a scaled-down version now and take the deeper, more expensive
look later.
- Don't delay
indefinitely. If your answer is not now, try to be specific. If
you think the reporter isn't ready to tackle this story, tell him what
you'd like to see him achieve first. If you think the news peg is weak,
say so and suggest some circumstances when the story might be more timely.
If you want the reporter to tackle another story first, say whether
this is next in line (acknowledging that circumstances could change
before its turn comes). If you don't expect this reporter will ever
do this story, say so and say why.
- Stretch your
reporters. If you doubt a reporter's ability to deliver on a story,
discuss your reservations candidly. Identify what in this proposal the
reporter has not done before or what in this project resembles something
a reporter tried before and didn't do well. Identify the specific skills
this story requires that this reporter has not demonstrated. Discuss
how the reporter might be able to take the project on: perhaps teaming
with another reporter who has the skills or experience the reporter
requires, perhaps with closer supervision than normal, perhaps a scaled-down
version of the story. You need to maintain a balance: You want to challenge
and stretch the reporter, but you want the reporter to succeed. Don't
cut the proposal down to the level of the reporter's current ability,
but don't let the plan exceed the reporter's probable grasp.
- Read up on
the topic. Check your clips and other newspapers to see what's been
written on the subject. Visit some Web sites and background yourself
on the topic. You need to help the reporter sharpen her focus and distinguish
between new material and old, between background the reporter must understand
and details the reader wants to know.
- Consider photos
and graphics. Ask the reporter about possible photos and graphics
that could accompany the story. Schedule a meeting with people from
either or both departments to plan how to proceed on the total package.
- Consider a timetable.
Discuss whether the reporter should work full-time on the story
or juggle it with other duties. Discuss news pegs and possible publication
dates. Discuss what you need to achieve by when to make the publication
date. Discuss whether other reporters should be involved and how much
of their time would be needed. Maybe you should do a "backout schedule"
right away. At the least, you should discuss how much time the story
will demand.
- Consider specific
stories. If the reporter is talking about a project of multiple
parts, discuss individual stories, or at least avenues of inquiry that
could result in stories.
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