One
of the major contributions reporters make is not just news,
but meaning. They should try to bring more storytelling to their
everyday stories. Don't just go for the straightforward and
dull story, says Steve
Buttry, Writing Coach, Omaha World-Herald. He compiled this
tip sheet.
Questions?
Call Steve at (402)444-1345.
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Make Routine Stories
Special
Move beyond meeting
stories.
Most meetings are inherently boring. That's why the public doesn't attend
them. Unless the action at a meeting is unusually exciting, look beyond
the action to the impact on readers. This requires advance planning. Look
at the agenda and ask how possible actions might affect readers or how
a report at the meeting might reflect something important happening in
your community. Henry Cordes of the Omaha World-Herald advises: "You can
do some interviews in advance to put some real people in the story." Make
your story an issue story in which the meeting is the news peg, rather
than a meeting story. Henry made a page-one centerpiece of a routine Regents
meeting by doing some advance work on minority graduation rates, which
were going to be reported at the meeting.
Become a storyteller.
When a meeting
itself is worthy of a story, tell it like a story. Who are the characters?
What is the plot? Describe the setting. Set up the conflict. Build to
the climax. Follow the resolution. Use dialogue to tell parts of the story.
Use story elements.
Use story elements to tell other types of routine stories: crimes, parades,
festivals, state fairs, first day of school, storms, awards, graduations,
sporting events. Elements such as character, setting, plot, conflict,
climax and dialogue are present in nearly every assignment. The writer
who recognizes and develops these elements turns the routine story into
a treat for reader and writer alike. Jack Hart of the Oregonian says reporters
"need to understand basic narrative, including the protagonist-complication-resolution
framework and the exposition-rising action-climax-denouement structure.
They need to know the difference between summary narrative and dramatic
narrative, direct quotes and dialogue, topic construction and scenic construction."
Find the full story.
Ken Fuson of the Des Moines Register notes that "most newspaper stories
are endings." Dig enough to find and tell the full story. Help the ending
make sense by presenting it as the climax or resolution of a full story.
Take detailed notes.
You can't develop the story elements when you sit down to write. You must
have them in mind as you are gathering information. Your notebook should
include details that allow you to develop a character or describe a setting.
At key moments, you should record dialogue in detail, including mannerisms,
action, gestures and facial expressions.
Find a fresh approach.
Regard the routine story as a challenge to your storytelling ability,
not a task to be rushed through routinely. Fuson once got one of the most
mundane, mind-numbing assignments any reporter can face: the year's first
springlike day. He wrote an award-winning story: a single 300-word paragraph
describing what Iowans do on the first day of spring. Don't give in to
the temptation to tell the routine story routinely. That identifies you
as a routine writer.
Find a fresh perspective.
Most times, a science fiction convention would run in the local section
of the Sunday paper. Daniel Finney of the Omaha World-Herald pushed it
to the front page by comparing that gathering to the Berkshire Hathaway
Corp. meeting the week before. "Reporters should give themselves permission
to take more chances -- try new things," Finney advises. "Slip in a pop
culture reference. Try using song lyrics. Liven up the writing by giving
yourself permission to sound like you."
Find analogies.
Rick Tapscott of the Des Moines Register asks, "What does this event,
situation, statement remind you of? Does it resemble something with which
a reader may be familiar? The governor's latest tactic with the Legislature
is like Tom Osborne's 1988 battle against Oklahoma, which came down to
the last-second trick play." Finney's sci-fi story is an example of an
analogy that became the basis for the story.
Watch the people.
Nearly every event you cover is important to someone. Focus on the people.
Find the person whose story is different from the rest of the crowd's
and tell that person's story. Carol Napolitano was working a Saturday
shift for the Omaha World-Herald once and got assigned to a story about
a Boys and Girls Club taking a field trip to the state prison. The story
could have been loaded with cliches about bad guys doing some good by
telling kids not to follow in their footsteps. She watched the people.
She found the boy in the group whose father was in the prison. Her story
became his story and it moved from routine to powerful.
Find the non-routine
view.
Many of the events you regard as routine are not routine to someone else.
Every crime, fire or accident is a traumatic and memorable event to the
victims. Your paper covers the state fair and the first day of school
every year so it feels routine to you. But each fair is some exhibitor's
first fair and each first day of school is some teacher's or student's
first day or the first day of some teacher's last year. Each annual business
meeting is some stockholder's first (or last) meeting. Find a person for
whom this event isn't routine and use him to make your story fresh.
Search for life
stories in the routine story.
Every year every high school presents a play, sometimes several. Fuson
won the ASNE non-deadline writing award for telling the human dramas of
the lives of the students in a school play. At each routine event are
people struggling with debt, disease, divorce, death and other burdens.
Is the mundane meeting an island of sanity for a worried participant?
Does the intersection between routine and chaos or between grief and daily
business present a story? Is someone recovering from surgery thankful
for the strength to make it to that boring meeting or struggling to sit
through it? Is some official missing an important family event for this
hearing?
Know the background,
but don't get lost in it.
Mike Reilly of the Omaha World-Herald advises: "Check for previous stories
on the subject so you know the context and will recognize the news. Clear
up your translations of technical language and jargon with sources as
early as possible so you can be clear and sparse with the basic facts.
You then will have more space in the paper and time on your hands to tell
the story in the most effective way possible."
Steal ideas.
When you read a story that succeeded in making the routine assignment
special, ask the reporter how she came up with the idea. You will learn
not just from the s
tory and the idea, but from the thought process that led to them.
Look for superlatives.
Tapscott notes that superlatives, when accurate, elevate a story above
the routine. "Can this event, situation, statement be said to be the first,
last, most recent, most aggressive yet; this biggest, most expensive,
the final leg in a relay race..."
Focus.
Bill Dedman of the Chicago Sun-Times advises: "Don't try to tell the history
of Cinco de Mayo, or cover the entire Earth Day story, in what will probably
be a short story anyway. Find one person to tell the story. For example,
at a graduation, find one graduate or parent -- or person who idolizes
the speaker. Find one fifth-grader at Earth Day who is nagging her parents
about recycling."
Use all five senses.
Laura Coleman of the Memphis Commercial Appeal says reporters covering
routine events "can do a better job putting the reader there if they tell
the reader what he or she not only would see, but hear, smell, touch and
even taste."
Expand your definition
of news.
Fuson advises that reporters wouldn't be writing as many routine stories
if we concentrated more on writing about affairs of the heart rather than
affairs of state.
Personify statistics.
Reports containing statistics are a classic "DBI" (dull but important)
story. Don't let them be dull. Graphics are much more effective than prose
at communicating statistics. Find a person, family, town or organization
that illustrates the findings in the report. Focus on what the figures
show, not on the numbers themselves. Census stories lend themselves well
to this approach. Or use the statistics to describe a mythical "typical"
person.
Seek out innovation.
It's a routine for many statehouse reporters to advance the legislative
session with a roundup of the key issues legislative leaders expect to
dominate the upcoming session. The Kansas City Times took a different
approach one year by examining innovative legislation passed in other
states. The paper went against the routine, telling about issues that
probably weren't coming up in our state legislatures, but perhaps should
be.
Get a jump on your
event.
You will bring more creativity to the routine story if you start thinking
about the challenge before the event. "Work the idea before you go," suggests
Kevin McGrath of the Wichita Eagle. "Good stories, and good storytelling,
stem from good ideas. One of the best pieces of advice I've seen is to
look for the basic human element. Ask yourself and your writer: What's
this story really about? A visit by 'Millionaire' is about dreams of striking
it rich, or grabbing 15 minutes of fame. A Cinco de Mayo story is usually
about family and self-identity. One of my team's writers covered a swim
club's year-end exhibition last year and found a story about transitions
in life. He covered a business closing and found a story about a woman
who refused to have her dream defeated by failure. This stuff's all around,
every day, in the things we cover. If we target them mentally before we
head out, we're more likely to find a better story once we get there,
even if it's only by virtue of changing the focus or theme at the scene."
One word of caution: Don't let your advance consideration lock you into
a preconceived approach. You still need to gather facts at the event and
use your senses there. Welcome the surprise that leads you onto a path
you hadn't planned.
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