"The impulse of story, both to tell it and to hear it, is one of the strongest impulses we know."
- Paula LaRocque, writing coach, Dallas Morning News
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Laurie Hertzel, Writing Coach/Team Leader at the Star Tribune in Minneapolis, wrote this piece on covering spot features for Above the Fold, their montly newsletter on writing.

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Covering spot features, or Stop looking for Rosa Parks

At API a couple of years ago, an editor talked about sending a reporter out to cover a community celebration. Rumor had it that Rosa Parks was going to be there, and the reporter spent all his time trying to find her. He walked past all kinds of colorful people and dramas - here I'm picturing fire-eaters, quarreling spouses, juggling clowns, stray dogs swiping shish kebabs from food kiosks - doggedly keeping his head down, trudging to and fro, searching for Rosa Parks.

I can't remember now whether he found her and came back with the same story that everybody else had, or whether he couldn't find her and came back with no story at all. But either way, he missed a huge opportunity.

``There were all kinds of interesting things going on,'' the editor complained. ``And this guy was so focused on finding Rosa Parks that he missed everything else.''

We decided that this was a pretty good metaphor for spot features. Too often, reporters trudge out to events and come back with predictable, standard roundups. You know - an overview of the parade, or a general description of the whole event.

But who wants to read that?

And who wants to write it? No wonder we try to push these assignments onto interns.

But spot features and color stories are a rare opportunity to do something different, unusual, surprising and fun. There's seldom any news here, so you might as well put on your tap shoes and entertain.

This kind of feature is all about story. It's all about a good read. Readers already know what a parade looks like, so don't describe it for them.

Tell a story.

The secret is in the focus. Find the staggering person who can't see out of her parade costume, or the curly-fries vendor who has burn marks up and down his arm but can't take a break for another three hours, or the bottled-water salesman who can't sell a bottle because it's raining, or the awestruck kid who gets so carried away with the parade that she runs right out into the middle of it.

A Detroit Free Press writer once covered an appearance by George Bush at a state fair by focusing entirely on one spectator who was sitting on an overturned plastic bucket. Turns out, this guy brings that bucket with him wherever he goes in case he needs an emergency front-row seat.

You, too, can find your bucket guy. Remember, if something catches your eye or your sense of the absurd, it likely will catch the readers', too.

We've had a couple of nice examples this summer: Kavita Kumar's story about the ongoing snafu with hot dogs at Aquatennial, and Allie Shah's piece about one artist at the Uptown Art Fair - and how, if you inch even one toe over his threshold, he starts his spiel.

Rosalind Bentley's Juneteenth feature from a few years back is legendary in its use of tone and voice. She didn't describe Juneteenth; she jumped right into it with both feet and took us with her.

And the next time you get a spot feature assignment, don't look for Rosa Parks. Go out, look around, listen, smell, talk to people and have some fun.

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